The Wonder Tree
By:brooke
The Wonder Tree I come out and there was a lady planting a tree I said’’ miss lady what are you doing’’ ‘’ Im planting a tree’’ said the lady and the lady disappeared in a minute and the tree grew in 2 seconds it was amazing but it srunk so I made a song little tree please please grow Im sad sad and it grew. Then the tree had a door I went in the tree said ‘’were do you want to go’’ I went to Rainbow End it was a amazing. When I was finshed I call my magic tree ‘’ come to me’’ it came to me so I went in when I got in I coudnt get out so I called for help but no one came. Suddenly I realised I didnt click the button ‘’silly me.
In writing I am leaning to use detail to make my story interesting. I feel proud because I leant lots of interesting words. I need to improve on capital letters and full stops.
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