The Wonder Tree

The Wonder Tree

By:brooke

The Wonder Tree I come out and there was a lady planting a tree I said’’ miss lady what are you doing’’ ‘’ Im  planting a tree’’ said the lady and the lady disappeared in a minute and the tree grew in 2 seconds it was amazing but it srunk so I made a song little tree please please grow Im sad sad and it grew. Then the tree had a door I went in the tree said ‘’were do you want to go’’ I went to Rainbow End it was a amazing. When I was finshed I call my magic tree ‘’ come to me’’ it came to me so I went in when I got in I coudnt get out so I called for help but no one came. Suddenly I realised I didnt  click the button ‘’silly me. In writing I am leaning to use detail to make my story interesting. I feel proud because I leant lots of interesting words. I need to improve on capital letters and full stops.

reflection

In maths I am leaning to count down to solve subtraction problems.I feel proud because I know lots of take away and pluses. I need to improve on working   half 's and time 's. In reading I am  learning to summarise in my own words. I feel proud  because I  am in gold level now. I need to improve on reading more books and lean more words. In writing I am leaning to use detail to make my story interesting. I feel proud because I leant lots of interesting words. I need to improve on capital letters and full stops.

Tēnā koutou katoa

Tēnā koutou katoa,

Ko Mt wellington te maunga

My mountain is…

Ko Tamaki te awa  

My river is…

Ko Watts te iwi

My tribe is…

Nō New zealand ahau

Ko Cody taku papa

My dad is…

Ko Natasha taku mama

My mum is…

Ko Brooke taku ingoa

My name is…

KoElm park  taku kura

My school is…

E 7 aku tau

My age is…

Nō reira, tēnā koutou, tēnā koutou, tēnā tātou katoa.

Therefore, greetings to you, greetings to you, greetings to us all.

Grandad

Self Portrait

Reading

WALT Find and Summarise information in a non fiction text.

Write 1 sentence in your own words about the beginning of the story.

1.tom wanted ferret’s but tom had lots of pets. So he ask his mum and dad if he can have one. Mum said”what if it bit the baby.

Write 1 sentence in your own words about the middle of the story.

1.tom went round to amy’s house her uncle fred was there. When he was there was a suppris for him it was monty.

Write 1 sentence in your own words about the end of the story.

1.monty  was hiding all over the place. Monty went up dads leg. Dad screamed help.

Reflection: It was easy

Explain everything

My Reflection:

I was learning to count down to solve subtraction problems. It was easy because I new how to solve subtraction problems. I would like to do it again.